Angelic Stars
Embrace my silent yearnings
Angels cry
With silent eyes
A soulful tranquility
Over shattered dreams
The mystical soul shine
Of baby eyes
And I
And I
I am hopelessly gone
Author notes
Written August 26th, 2006
A contest entry
- *** Untitled Contest *** by Hebz.
425 points, ended September 21, 2007, 74 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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WOW
"A soulful tranquility"
Yeah & the colors are tranquiling too...
Very lovely piece, I love the images pictured with these beautiful words...
Thnx alot for entering & Best of Luck
Much love
Heba
GloriousGift
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thank you for your hymn to the inner silence. yes, the I is the only hindrance to the silent mind. it will vanish after ending its job...
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this is enagmatic...you are wonderful...puttin given words in an meaningful form thet which has so much to think is great,,,thank you for sharing keep writing your heart out -
good lil short poem,but where is your hopeful heart?
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Although mine were not used (pretend sad face) this is a beautiful write like everyone has said .. You've done it once again my friend... I wont be on much anymore, so may not get the chance to say ..its been great getting to know you through this art I truly hope you keep at it and inspire others
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Absolutely lovely! Truly beautiful words. I'm glad my two little words could be shoved in there too.
Teehee. And put to good use.
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My dear friend I must say it is an awe inspiring write with such beautiful words joined together as one. I am honoured to be a part of the touching poem. Many Blessings
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This was short, but very touching! I liked it! Keep writing! I added you to my favorites. I can't wait to read more!
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That was great scorpio rising, if nothing else, this contest inspired a poem out of you, and I am thrilled to have been a part of it...
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This is beautiful! What a wonderful write with the 2line quotes. It all went so very well together and made such a deeply emotional write.
Truely amazing read!
I love it, magical!
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Simply beautiful!
This is absolutely beautiful Scorpio!!!
I am honored that some of my words inspired you!!
I love this piece
Shannon -
Scorpio, this is such an awesome write!!!
You really are amazing my friend!
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Thankyou so much!!
Do see what I mean though....
How am I going to pick a winner? -
It is STUNNING! Really! I absolutely am in love with it, the words are very very beautiful together! And paint such an elegant picture.
I don't know what to say, dammit, I'm speechless.
You're amazing...of course!
♥
Michele
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