Drip drop
I promise many things,
but deliver nothing.
A moment suspended in time
where lies become reality
and truth disappears
where this fantasy is something
---> much. more. real.
Dreams and consciousness fade and blur
into something
---> all. the. same.
a time when all things change
and the world stops for me and you
a light flickers on and off at the end of the tunnel
and a neverending flood of fake regrets pours over you.
a moment of hope between the lies.
Author notes
Honest opinions appreciated.
Written August 26th, 2006
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Do ya ThanG!!!!
You kunG fu is very stronG!!! I told you this before, and now it's stronGer! Did you know some of the GREATEST writer of our time aren't discovered because they live in places like this. Only to Grace a few eye with the priviledGe readin their work. Like you Love!!!! I have truly missed you and your peoms, or KUNG FU!!! Haahahahahah!!!
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rawr
so, this partly so i don't have to keep giving you my url, lmfao... and partyl because HELLO!! this is fucking gorgeous. i love it. i don't really know how to critique, and i don't think much is needed here, if at all... love the ending:
"a time when all things change
and the world stops for me and you
a light flickers on and off at the end of the tunnel
and a neverending flood of fake regrets pours over you.
a moment of hope between the lies. "
hearts <3 XO
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very complex!and the
truth shall set you
free,lol -
Wow that a really good write. Im looking forward to reading more by you.
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