With blazing eyes of heart's desire,
A man of words sets souls afire. To
Reach beyond the blissful mind, just
Read his works and you will find.
Imagery of humbled needs. This
Observation I truly see. A
Range of complexities in which he writes,
Of hopes he holds within his sight. But
Further look and one shall see,
Time to bid farewell, Fortunate Fantasy.
His gentle request to find a new, this
Epithet I hereby give to you. Take to
Heart, what I believe it to mean, for your
Emerging soul has softly been seen.
Arise a new man, a new day, a new start. And be
Ready to face the world as
The Warrior of the Heart.
Author notes
Again, use as you will, poem, name, and background.
G
Written August 26th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Find me a new name by WarrioroftheHeart.
300 points, ended September 3, 2006, 14 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Thank you, much appreciated.
Storm -
congrts!
great name.
best,
rachel
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Thank you very much for the comment, and the compliment. Much appreciated.
Storm -
dman good. i want to write like you. i like the name too.
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Thank you for your comments, much appreciated.
Storm -
A wonderful entry. A great name and a lovely poem. I do envy Adrian for getting this, LOL. He really should consider it an honour.
good luck!
rachel
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Ummmm, maybe? lol
Thanks for the comments.
Storm -
funny how this speaks to me,do i know you?
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I also checked both of them when I commented on them, forgot to mention that one the comment above, probably in the other one too, I think it might act as a time stamp. I'll check them all again at the end of the contest as well.
Adrian -
Thank you Adrian. I saw the update. I will say when I entered this name, it was not taken. So if it shows up now...
Glad you like this one too.
Storm -
Thank you John, I truly appreciate your comments.
Storm -
I love this entry too
All of it, poem, acrostic and name
Thank you, such wonderous gifts so freely given. Thank you again
Adrian
p.s. I put an update on the contest page and I'm pretty sure I'd value your opinion because I was going to write it here. Especially because both of yours are so good -
Outstanding
This has to be one of the best poems I have read of late, both the content and the form are fantastic. You have really excelled this time, what else is there to say but great, blessings John -
Thanks Jeannie, appreciate it much.
Storm -
Thank you Angel, appreciate your comments.
Storm -
Wow!! What an incredible write this is. Just fricking awesome. Your talent consistantly blows me away. Just brilliant. Thank you for sharing. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Jeannie
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Oh what a beuatiful write and what a beautiful name to have chosen for your friend! Loved both! Wishing you all the best,
Sandy
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