You be the pen, and I'll be the paper
We'll write up something juicy at twilight,
Let's keep the ink a flowing freely
And whip up a great piece tonight.
So many new things we can try
Like Cinquain, Haiku, or Free Verse,
We can even try poetry in motion
For sure, if worse comes to worse.
You might dip your pen in your inkwell
Even write in calligraphy,
We go together, that's for sure
Something that comes so naturally.
As soon as your pen makes contact
You will tattoo my paper beautifully,
Finally, we have both come together
United as one, now that's sweet poetry!
Author notes
WRITTEN 7/7/2006
Written August 26th, 2006
A contest entry
- your personal best by indomitable.
600 points, ended July 7, 2008, 37 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is a cute write
I enjoyed the read and its a great muse good luck in the contest
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awwww! this is sweet! about as lovey dovey as i can handle, but written so well and with such great uniqueness it doesnt bug me. this is very well written, i love the metaphors! my favorite line is "you will tattoo my paper beautifully." such a great idea.
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wow i actually like it
nice work
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I love it ... the undertones of making something other than poetry are magnificent
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*sigh* This is beautiful!!! And it sounds like the makings of a beautiful and brillant Collab!!! hehe. What a great job you did on this one!!!!!
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This is so not Dirty PRetty.....
I like the write though.
Love and Peace, Charlene. -
i like this. i wrote something called the pen & paper dream-but its a lot darker. i do like this though you expressed it very well and this is what it is like when your set out to be a poet and a writer. thanx for entering & good luck in my contest !
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wow, i loved this poem! very witty and well written. it made me smile. good job!
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