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My Lullaby

Let the world sleep when you are sad, let the rain put out your fires when you are mad

Remember, tomorrow's yet to come, and I'll still be here my little one

And when you seem all alone, and darkness is all you've known

I'll be your ray of truth, I'll bring myself to you

I'll know when you need me most of all, and I'll be your rope if you happen to fall

Let the world sleep when you are sad, let the rain put out your fires when you are mad

Remember, tomorrow's yet to come, and I'll still be here my little one...

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Written August 26th, 2006

♥ Write a nursery rhyme or bed-time song for a child

A contest entry

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  • bananasfoster42
    August 2, 2007
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    this is really sweet. i can see this being sung to little kids. thanks for entering!


  • Cr187
    August 26, 2006
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    This is a lullaby I like to sing to my cousins when it's storming out or when they wake up from nightmares. It puts them to sleep, and they're fine so I'm glad you felt what they felt.


  • Jaded Lily gold member
    August 26, 2006
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    Calming and Reassuring

    Cr187,

    Great job on this lovely little rhyming piece for little ones. You have a nice way with calming the fears with those who are afraid. Like Kari said, This could almost be sung as a song. Thank you so very much for entering and I wish you the best of luck now and always.

    Blessings,

    Lily


  • Kari gold member
    August 26, 2006
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    Good Luck!

    This was wonderful...I could almost sing it. You did a great job. Best of luck to u in the contest!

    Kari