[tell me of forever]
as I feel your breath against my neck
[promise me always]
as you whisper how much you love me
[let go of me never]
while I turn for another kiss
[tell me of forever]
and look into my eyes
[promise me always]
when you say you've never felt like this
[let go of me never]
when the words are to strong to say
[tell me of forever]
I know its all true
[promise me always]
as I've always promised you
[let go of me never]
because I couldn't stand you gone
Tell me of forever...
Author notes
I thank God for him everyday...
Written August 26th, 2006
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Awww girl, this is beautiful!!
I'm very glad to see you so happy with your boy!
I wish you the best <3 -
This is beautiful. You used the sayings in the []'s perfectly, so it doesn't seem the slightest bit redundant.
Great form and flow. Keep it up!
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Wow this is beautifull!!! Great write!!! I love the format!!
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i agree the pattern is really helpful. it allows the reader to focus on just on what this man means to you. it's lovely.
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AdequaeSuspicions~
Hey! This was the best poem that I have read in a while. I really enjoyed it, and I feel the same for the boyfriend that I am with now. Love is so grand. Thank you for sharing this poem with all of us here. I really enjoyed it. I hope to see more by you soon.
~!~Manda~!~ -
beautiful
Aww, what a beautiful and loving poem
I love the set out, at first glance it looked confusing but then you read it and it is sheer beauty in your words
You obviously love this young man, Best of luck in your relationship my dear
Keep up the great writing always
Stay safe
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