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Half of me

I looked in a mirror
Just the other day
I saw only half a reflection
Because since you left me
On my own
There is only half of me

There is a well known saying
We will always be one
Our hearts
Our lives
Our souls
Now my heart is broken
Torn in half by the one I love

You thought I would recover
You were wrong
How can I
When you have half my heart
Half my life
And half my soul
How can I
When I am dead inside

I want to move on
I really do
But the fact is
I still love you

Author notes

Just a little something i whipped up after reading a few love poems. Enjoy
Written August 26th, 2006

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  • Puppydog gold member
    August 29, 2006
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    A VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM!

    You took and wrote a poem of how all of us have felt at one time or another as the one we love leaves, we do feel as if we are only half the person we once was.


  • 1-Winged-Angel
    August 26, 2006
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    thanks guys I'm glad you liked it <333


  • sabaku-kojo
    August 26, 2006
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    aww, that's really sad but cute at the same time...but it flowed in a way that's just so beautiful
    good write


  • Imagine Disaster
    August 26, 2006
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    i like the last two lines they made me laught the way it flowed