Over whelmed again tonight
I thought I had won the fight
Cutting was out of my mind
But no it was only a matter of time
I saw that pencil sitting there
And the pain I could no longer bare
I took the eraser and rubbed away skin
How but the pain was only about to begin
I rubbed and rubbed till it bled
I don't care I want to be dead
So many layers of skin, erased
But now with pain I'm faced
It stings with immense pain
The sting enough to drive one insane
Now it's a red and aching
As my soul inside is breaking
Here's my new way to release my sorrow
My luck I'm gonna burn again tomorrow
But don't worry I'm still gonna cut
Just going to burn my skin somewhat
I hate myself, I cut I burn
I guess there's only way to learn
And for me I guess that ways self harm
Burns and Cuts upon my arm
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Written August 26th, 2006
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wow! this is so beautiful! I can relate to this poem, I am a cutter to, and tried to stop, it's so hard, and all you think about is how much you're hurting and how in once simple action it can all end. you dilivered this very well, I could feel you sorrow, I'm sorry for your pain.....you are an amazing author, and I will definatley be adding you to my favorites
....... I saw your page it's awsome!!!!! i love the quotes especially this one " you think seeing my scars is tough, try being th one who makes them" that quote is amazing....anywho keep writting and I'll keep reading
~tasha~
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Good ryhme, and the picture is very clear. I love the erasers on the side! Very creative! great poem
Kuts & Kisses
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Loving the poem.. I love ur work... Good use of lines...
Ur AP Mom,
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this is a reallli good poem... i realli like the 1st 4 lines... its exactly what im like atm... im like quitting cutting and i havnt done it in almost 2 months and sometimes that urge juss gets so hard to resist and like you thort ud won... but u did... i also liked the flow thru it... its realli good it made me wanna keep reading, it wasnt hard to read... i like thispoem its really well done... kepp it up...
Love jenny
XoXo
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