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Hope (Monotetra)

Find the beauty inside her eyes
Masked by smiles of what she hides
Again, her life filled by the lies
And then she cries, and then she cries

One more day slowly going on
The hurt won't cease, it's never gone
Another move, she's just a pawn
Her soul withdrawn, her soul withdrawn

Reach deep inside, see hopes and dreams
Look past that flow of tearful streams
Free her from all the hellish screams
On bright moonbeams, on bright moonbeams

Find the beauty inside her eyes
Cut loose, the cords of her disguise
Renew the hope her heart denies
Before she dies, before she dies

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Hmmm, so trying this form thingy...
Written August 26th, 2006

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 26, 2006
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    Thanks hun, always appreciate your comments.

    Storm

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 26, 2006
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    Thank you for the comment, much appreciated. I suck at form poetry. I suppose it's why I created my own form, mistakenly. But I have got to spread my poetic wings and fly a little.

    Storm

  • Hekate gold member
    August 26, 2006
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    Deep!

    This was so very deep sis. You did a wonderful job. Thanks for sharing hun.

    Kari
  • regret me
    August 26, 2006
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    have no clue about any kind of form but i can see clearly that this is pure art!beautiful and depressing almost romantic and hopeful,very nice!