Soft reflections of history's past
savoring moments unsurpassed
Tears of remorse swelled wearisome
unaware of lone times to come
Trials lurking in shadow's home
seethe me into a richly loam
Failed miserably inducing forced regret
advancing contrite silhouettes
Endured remains of weather's storm
delicate memories sigh forewarn
Quiet! Hear, advisory screams;
failure I knew outside of my dreams
Shedding glimmer's love forsaken
life's contentment had been taken
Yearning adolescence appear again
forgive me a time when life first began
Undo the mistakes that has taken life
give me a chance to resolve feeble strife
Waiting patiently time presses forward
compensation lingers as hope's reward
remorsely pleading silently to the Lord
After all is said and done, past has gone it's way
approaching near life's window, obscure dreams decay
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Written August 25th, 2006
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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I really loved this one!!!!
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i think you did an extreme job on this. your wording is beyond the ordinary usage in writing and the effort you put into this is clearly seen. great job and i love the purple.
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Wind~ this was breathtaking! I'm speechless, hard to follow this example. Your growing into such a strong poet my friend! I am very impressed here. ~Sie
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awsome write
I enjoyed this poem alot keep up the good work
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