If only
You could see
What became of me
After I saw you
If only
You could see
How I've wondered
If only
Love wasn't so hard
Maybe I'd have a chance
If only
You could see
How I wished
That I would be yours
And you would be mine
If only
You could stand in my shoes
Listen though my ears
And feel what I feel
If only
You could
See me as I see you
Author notes
okay...um...I wrote this poem a really long time ago. and I was going through my old emails...and I forgot I wrote this one. I think it's really good. I wrote it for cassie. but it could apply to anyone. THIS IS THE ORIGANAL ONE SHE CALLED ME AN ASS FOR!!! "Superman" was after this...by like 6 months...well hope you like it.
Written December 29th, 2005
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WONDERFUL
I really liked this one its a feeling everyones had before why someone would insult you about this i don't know whoever she is shes insane for not keeping you
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friggin beautiful
Wow thats amazing i like it like a lot sweety yew amazed me in this one VERY friggin beautiful write here honey
love peace and chiken grese,
~<3~,
emily also known as justbeyourself -
wow !!!! omgosh .... this write left me speechless .... !!!! wow !!!! go tommy !!!!
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Tommy! Long time no see, how you doin? I was thinking about not reading something of yours in a while, and then this came along... which I might say is great! It is really good, I can't believe she called you an ass for it, it's so sweet and heartfelt and perfect!
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I do like it...minus the word 'though' near the end of the poem. I think this is a typo and should be 'through'. Can't say as this relates to me, but I still like it. Good job. I hope you find true love one of these days.
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