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So here we are again, here we are again
I recall you saying something
Another someone they can't stand
Much better now it's loaded
Put it all together with the pieces shredded
Voices raised on a level high
So here we are again, here we are again
Don't cry, don't say you're sorry
And we'll go slowly, again
Let us be honest, I'm in the wrong
Does it make you wonder why
So here we are again, here we are again
Running away, we're standing strong
I'm sorry he's still speaking
The little things that bring me down
Degraded, I'm faded, but you're going on
So here we are again, here we are again
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Author notes
*sigh*
Written August 25th, 2006
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Awesome write
This was an amazing piece for me. I love the repetition usage, not to much, enough to get the message through. I love the use of raw emotion in this piece. The imagery here is amazing! All in all this piece is great I think! I like the flow the most, how it seems to pick up in spots of high emotion, and slow in the spots that would most likely indicate upset or sadness. The sigh in the notes says a lot also. Sometimes to write and share is the best kind of therapy.
Support Your Muse! Write on!
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Hm..another deep and cynical write. This had a little rhyme in it, which is good. Didn't sound cheesy at all, you kept the flow going smooth. I wasn't really sure what you were trying to convey though, but I guess it's up to the reader to interpret your words for themselves. Anyways, I remember you said you were in a slump, but this is pretty good to break out of it. Love ya buddy, even though it doesn't sound like it here!
Schmitty -
This poems pretty sad...
its sounds as though your sick and tired of something...
with the repeated lines "So here we are again, here we are again"
I also liked the line
"Degraded, I'm faded, but you're going on"
keep up the good writes...i hope your well..
x~Ree~x
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