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i feel left out

have you ever feeled left out
like you can't belive that you where
why do i got the feeling that you left me out with out a dot?
why do you like her more?
why am i engorged?
i feel like you like her more
i feel left in the cold to have NO! one to hold?
why do i feel like you love her more than you do me?
i feel sad like i want to cry
and i steel wounder why you like her more than you do me?
why am i left out?
i just can't seem to wounder why you like her more?
and why you ignored me when i ask you that question?

bye Moo-moo

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Written August 25th, 2006

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  • MoO-mOo
    August 25, 2006
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    i wrote out my feeling hust because i felt this way and it happend to me before to so ya! and i hope you like my story and you read it k so that is all i wanted to say about my peon