The way you make me feel,
It feels so good inside,
But sometimes it makes me feel sad,
This is why I've cried.
I fear that missing you too much,
Will break my heart in two,
But both these halves will love you twice again
Its then my heart will mend.
For you do give me something,
So i can smile inside,
Its then i truly know,
That all the tears I've cried,
They have all had a purpose,
And so i do believe,
That ill always truly love you,
Because its you i need.
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Seeing as i have no insperation to write at the moment i thought i would add a poem that a friend of mine wrote about me. hope you all enjoyed it as much as i did!
Written August 25th, 2006
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The wording was good. I thought the overall poem had meaning and you make the reader feel your meaning. I did not understand why you used "i", did that have some significance?
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