If you only knew how much i loved you
If you only knew how much i cared
Though i know you may not want to
It's all I can do
If only i could tell you
If only i could cry
If only i could hold you
If only you would try
I hate to do this
I hate to see you hurt
I loved your kisses
I loved you
You and me only
You and me forever
You and me together
Isn't that what we said
Please don't forget me
Please don't cry
Please never regret us
Please just remember
Author notes
this is something i wrote for someone special and she knows who she is and i hope you all like it.
Written August 25th, 2006
A contest entry
- Anything Beautiful by Dirty and Broken.
900 points, ended March 24, 2007, 13 entries
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how am i not supposed to cry when you do this to me?
i don't regret us, i regret that i ever took you back though, i regret giving you one more chance to hurt me.... -
why are you doing this to me?i don't understand....
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i changed it up a little maybe you would like it this way...but i wanted to enter sumthin and it had to be quick.......so it's a sumwhat revised old one.......tell me if you like....if i can do this again i will try to get back to you
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wow! i think this poem is gr8, this really touched me and reminds me of myself and my thoughts r the same good work i loved it xxxxx
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Thanks i guess i just had to put it i wrote for my girl and thatnk you again for your comments
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Awesome!
I loveddddddd this..you could make a song out of this one. Thank u very very much for sharing it. I enjoyed reading!
Kari
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