Wuthering
Unwelcoming
Tainted with sadness
Hauntingly surrounding me
Enveloping my madness
Reasons for staying
Including you?
None, cathy come to me,i know you've not
Gone
Heathcliff i hear you
Ever shall you dream
I return to you nightly
Grasp out
Hold
That
Scream
Author notes
Written August 25th, 2006
A contest entry
- Dark Dark Dark by xXLifelessLindseyxX.
700 points, ended February 24, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Excellent
Very short yet still so very impacting. Great write and thanks for entering. -
Great Job... Good Write!
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Marvellous..
Short and Impactful.....We all know whom Heathcliffe and cathy are...well done. -
Okay, this is cool. I loved this book and the poem, yeah a little eerie but that is part of what makes it a great write. Cool, and thank you so much for entering!
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Excellent characterization with so few words! Chilling and evocative! I especially liked this stanza:
Heathcliff i hear you
Ever shall you dream
I return to you nightly
Grasp out
Hold
That
Scream
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onother great one by you HB my mind has gone off the deep end with my vision of the end i truly should stay out of the gutter keep doing well
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i like it! i read the book...a while ago...but from what i remember this is really good!
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i really enjoyed the book, and am pretty impressed with how well you used the accrostic format to evoke the charachters. very nice write.
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Wow this is very different from the rest. I haven't read the book yet, but I'm going to read it just because you have writen a poem about it. Seem like a good book
Wish you the best
Snow
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this was creepy and chilling.but i liked this.
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I loved the book.
I loved this poem.
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