Should I be angry at you?
Should I hate you?
As you want me to?
Should I?
Should I just forget that you exist?
That someone as beautiful as you resides in this world?
Should I hate you?
You have rejected me and hurt me,
You have shattered my heart with no hope of it ever mending.
Should I be angry at you?
Did you even think about what it could have been?
Am I so detestable?
If I am,
I should just die,
For I have nothing to live for.
The pain is worse than death,
How could I have been so shallow and not noticed,
that someone like you would never love someone such as I?
How could I have been so naive,
To believe that you would have even thought about it?
Was I to optimistic to notice?
It was but a vain hope,
To hold you in my arms,
To kiss and love you.
For hope will not change what you think of me,
I suffer but do not worry about me,
You have already hurt me as far as you possibly could.
Yet I am being unfair,
You too have feelings,
Which i must respect.
You say that you too are hurting,
I would never do anything to hurt you,
you must understand that.
I say this as I lay on the shroud of Darkness,
full of emptiness, loneliness, sadness, sorrow and pain.
Waiting once again for someone to save me
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Written August 25th, 2006
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Aw this was so sweetly and sadly written...easily relatable
"I say this as I lay on the shroud of Darkness," -->that line really got me for some reason. Well done.
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wow.. so much to what i am feeling rite now
its kinda scary . but i love this.
its really good.
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... a poem full of emotions.... you describe understandable feelings...well done 
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I like this poem u need to do more like this
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i think it is a good poem....
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