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Easter Is A Special Time

Well Easter is almost here.
Oh what A wonderful time of year.
It is a time of renewing faith.

For me it is a time for rejoicing.
With Mother Nature, as she comes alive.
To show off all her glory in plants and animals.

For the kids it is time for the Easter bunny to come a calling.
To bring all the goodies, Such as candy and colored eggs.

For me it is see my child dress up in her new clothes.
Looking and like a angel as sweet as she can be.

For many it is a time of rejoicing,
Because it is the time of their God rising again.

For me it is the time of Hare Moon,
Which is springtime and fertility.
See all of nature renewing itself again.

Oh! What a blessed time of year.
Blessing to All.
Bless Be.

(c) Rose Patrick April 15,2003
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Written April 15th, 2003

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  • RollingStone silver member
    April 16, 2003
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    I like the wide spectrum of meaning you give
    to the easter season. makes this poem accessible
    to a wide range of readers.

    in the forth stanza, I kind of stumble at the line:
    "Looking and like a angel as sweet as she can be."
    not sure if that's what you meant to write or if
    it might be a typo.

    I think my favorite stanza is:
    "For me it is the time of Hare Moon,
    Which is springtime and fertility.
    See all of nature renewing itself again."
    I really like this!

    very nice poem.



  • AnnD Moderators member
    April 15, 2003
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    a most beautiful write Rose.
    i love this time of year.....Spring....when all of nature comes to life again.

    Ann


  • dittysri silver member
    April 15, 2003
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    very good

    Very good write, so sensitive and loving. I enjoyed it immensely.