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Black Eagle

look at the setting sun,
feel your heart melt.
Human from demon,
Demon from human again.
the cage in which I imprisoned all that I feel,
has been tore apart,
so demon from human,
human to demon once more,
and when you've had enough,
have some more.
and when the sky darkens,
and you can't find your friend,
blame the devil,
and nobody else.
look at the rising sun,
and feel the joy.
Demon to human,
Human from Demon again.
All that i feel,
is imprisoned again.
so from angel to human,
from demon to hell.
The black eagle,
who is my shadow,
brings fear in the hearts,
of all those who are brave.

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  • RavenDragonmind
    October 10, 2006
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    I know.how are you feeling now??You were feeling sick werent you??


  • September 10, 2006
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    this is Corrie from spanish class btw X)


  • September 10, 2006
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    Sweet

    wow this ones my fav... its emo but awsum!!!


  • RavenDragonmind
    September 2, 2006
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    thnx a lot.


  • VanGoghNights
    September 2, 2006
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    Interesting

    Interesting write... I can feel all your emotions when I read this write.. Nice work!!! Keep up the good work and Good Luck!
    ♥Savina♥


  • FlyingXDaggers
    August 31, 2006
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    good job

    this is really good, i like it n_n
    ♦Blood Rains♦

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