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Tangible Memory

You can only be there
One time
And all your life after
You will find
You're looking for the artifacts
A tiny tangible memory
A visual aid for you to see
Again and again
Again and again
So will I see you
So will I see you
So will I see you
Again?

And you can only be with her just
One time
And all your life after
Is just a lie
For when it dies you're in disguise
What flies for happy isn't real
A mask denies the cold hard truth
Again and again
Again and again
So will I see you
So will I see you
So will I see you
Again?

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