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untitled haiku

the cicada's call
floating on the stagnant air -
to be twelve again!

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It's days like today where I wish i were a kid again. Just not in the mood to be in the office...

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  • ClassixGrace
    February 25, 2007
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    nice... this was ok


  • DawnBaby
    February 6, 2007
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    Loved it!

    Love haiku and this one is a gem, I can definitely relate to this one. Great job!