This man of many words, to
Reach beyond our eyes,
Allowing one to see, what his
Name once disguised. Then
Quietly he requests, a change
Unto himself, but one
Imagination sits upon the shelf. Now
Left to those around him,
He, seeks a way to find. An
Entry in the contest,
And bare this name one of a kind.
Read by AP, this man, a work of art,
Then to present you as the new Tranquil Heart.
Author notes
As stated in the poem, given to you. Use at your discretion. I just see it as fitting.
If you so choose the name, the background is your for the taking as well.
Written August 23rd, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Find me a new name by WarrioroftheHeart.
300 points, ended September 3, 2006, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Well I had a few to go with tranquil. And I wanted something that was usable if it is what you wanted. I checked this one and it was available when I corrected it. I was going to leave it, figuring at first you can add an underscore, but then that wouldn't be unique. So I updated.
Storm -
Tanks Linda. A knack I picked up to be able to see more than what people let on at times. I am a dream walker.
Storm -
You didn't have to change it I loved it anyway just upset that someone else thought of it first
Always makes me feel like the last one to know something
I like the change though, it also very good
Thanks
Adrian
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Truly amazing work of art both in verse and background.
You may have nailed him with this one
How can so many others out there have names that describe
someone so unique???
Wish you well with this one sweetie.
Linda -
Ok hun, corrected this one, and I have another in mind, so I will get to working on putting into words.
Storm -
Figures, ugh. Ok, I have a variation of it and will make some changes. GIve me a little bit and I'll be back.
Storm -
Storm, Love the background by the way
Just checked through Allpoetry
and found that the name is already in use
I knew it was a fantastic name
Here's a link to their author page
allpoetry.com/Poets/Tranquil%20Serenity
Adrian -
Thank you Anne. It is what I envision with Adrian, and I didn't just want to slap a name on a page. What fun is that? So of course, then I had to go make a background to go with it, lol. Appreciate the comments.
Storm -
oh I like this name too.
a great write which style i blatantly copied.
I love the way you weave it into a tale my dear, well found! -
Thank you Keith. I appreciate your confidence.
Storm -
Excelent
This ladies a winner, with the name she does choose, for it came from her heart, so she just cannot lose.
Well done Storm a wonderful thoughtful name.
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Thanks Kari.
Storm -
Thank you Sandy, appreciate your comments.
Storm -
Awesome!
Wow awesome sis. You did a good job on this and as u already know I love acrostics lol.
Great job!
Kari
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A most beautiful write, Storm! I wish you all the best in the contest!
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Glad you like it. Thank you for the compliment.
Storm -
Thank you
Its such a nice name
and a great acrostic and poem
wow
Adrian
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