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Sometimes...

Sometimes I wish I could wreck this place
Let go of this frustration, this anger
Throw everything else to the floor
And scream till my voice becomes hoarse

Sometimes I wish I had the strength of ten men
Lift everything off the ground, just to slam it back down
Destroy everything in my vicinity
Just to feel that rush of adrenalin

Sometimes I wish I could summon the courage
The courage to unleash the beast within me
Let loose of this hatred I've kept at bay
The pathetic story of my every single day

Sometimes I wish I was all alone
Alone in this world we think we're living in
Nothing left to anchor me to sanity
Then, only then, can I plan for a painless suicide

This painless suicide should be quick and fast
Then it would be a dream come true
Forgive me for I've never asked to be born
Oh my sweet suicide, when will you answer my call?

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just me letting go of my frustrations, with passion
Written August 23rd, 2006

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  • Delrondu
    August 26, 2006
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    Thank you. nice contest btw.

  • emotion-explosion
    August 25, 2006
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    ya, u got it right, with passion! lots of it displayed here! i love the first and second stanzas especially. i love them cause i can relate to them. great write!


  • Jamilichid
    August 24, 2006
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    Very good poem, and very passionate! good luck in the contest!