Some days I'll sit and wonder
who I've been and what I've done,
while my mind wasted away.
I'll think of past decisions
and the way you saw me,
wonder if I could have loved you
or if you could have loved me.
Wonder if you really thought of me badly,
and wonder when I didn't hurt you
cause all I can remember is pain,
and when you poured your heart out to me
I closed up.
Then I'll wonder why I treated you the way I did
when we had a mutual want,
and that was to have our love returned.
I'm sorry I lied
and I'm sorry I don't remember the me you loved,
cause I never want to be her again.
The change in me was inevitable,
ignorance is bliss
but there is only so long that you can be ignorant.
I love your memory,
the way you held my guilty hands,
and wiped my tears when he didn't love me.
I love you so much
but you could never love me.
Author notes
This is a sample of my poetry. If you like it I could be your big sis. I naturally have a lil brother. So I am a big sis already. I hope I didn't mess up.....I didn't know what I should enter. So I just entered on of my old poems. Well I hope you liked it.
Written August 23rd, 2006
A contest entry
- i need an ap family by lost-in-yesterday.
300 points, ended September 6, 2006, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Loved It
Wow! You wrote this really well. I really like your writing style. Post more of your poems, because you have a real gift.
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welli love it its great and sure you could be one of my older sisters i have a couple there cool
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Thank you for reading my poem and leaving such a nice comment.
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Thanks for your comment. It is not so often I get such a gratifying comment. I am glad you took the time to read my poem and leave me such a nice comment.
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These words ring true in my heart. This poem captures an overlooked perspective of love and expresses it in beautiful yet painful words. This is the type of poem that we never see enough of.
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WOW!!! This was completly amazing!!!! This is a differnt view that what you might see everyday! People talking about how they have been hurt! You put your self on the other side and I REALLY love reading that! It makes it unique! and the words that you used PERFECTLY described it! It was so deep that you really made me feel quilty.... made me think about all the things I have done wrong! You really made me want to change! I love this! I think my favorite part was "The way you help my quilty hands" that was the part that made me go WOW... this hits home... and im 100% sure I am NOT the only person that this will touch! So I am so glad that you posted this and promoted it!!! Again.... WOW!!!
Your Amazing!
Much Love,
~ Princess Padge
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