Ring pulled tight, her wicked smile
Gentle tugging on the chain
She finds the pleasure in your pain
Flicking out against your skin
Each stroke to cause a moan
Trembling, let out a groan
She finds the pleasure in your pain
To drop you to your knees
Beg her for your release
Trembling, let out a groan
Each nerve on edge, burning
Her touch leaves you yearning
Beg her for your release
Flicking out against your skin
Ring pulled tight, her wicked smile
Then draws you deep within
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Written August 23rd, 2006
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Thanks for the comments, much appreciated.
Storm -
THIS IS VERY EASY TO IMAGINE...EXTREMELY DESCRIPTIVE...YOU USED SOME AMAZINGLY VIVID IMAGES CAME TO MIND...
WELL VERY GOOD POEM...
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LOL, thanks for the comments hun. Glad you, ummm, liked it.
Storm -
Wow! You got me yearning for more!
A touch of that sweet pain. Ooooh! Hurt me honey! 
Oh wait, sorry. I think said that out loud. Oops. Umm, yeah. Me go.. well. I think we get the point. 
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Thanks sweetie, appreciate your comments. Glad you enjoyed this.
Storm -
Very very tantalizing, sweety. Just the type to make a man sigh. Very wonderfully crafted, as usual.
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LOL, watch what you wish for....
Thanks hun
Storm -
Wow baby I cant wait LOL Great write baby. Really has me wanting.
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Thank you Kari. Appreciate it.
Storm -
AWESOME!
Sis you bad??? neverrrrrrrr 
This was wonderful sweetheart! 
Kari -
Well what can I say. You know...when I'm good, I'm good, but when I'm bad, I'm very, very good. .
Thanks for the comments hun, appreciate it.
Storm -
'Her touch leaves you yearning' - wow, that is the kind of poetry a guy like to hear. I'm almost afraid to ask where your inspirations come from, but I do like the end results. Girls with wicked smiles may not be the girls you take home to mother, but they are the kind of girl you want to take home.
Overall, a good write. My pure virgin mind may never be the same again. James
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