To good for some
Never will be good enough for others
all the drama and stress
not of my own but from
family, friends, sisters and brothers
I get down and low
I get quiet and slow
Tired and worn out
don't want to hear
you run your mouth
Never to good for some
don't care if I'm not good enough for others
only called when needed
I've had it up to here and
I'm leaving!
Author notes
Tired today from everyone elses problems. Have you been here?
Written August 23rd, 2006
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Good write I enjoyed it
The flow is good and I like the rhyme in some parts
Well done!
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heck yea i been there! thousands of times!cept i neer have the strngth to leave. people talk to me when they have problems. am i just spose to walk away? if i did, wouldnt they hate me? wouldnt they be mad? but then, should i even care? the same people can talk about me just as easy as asking for help.....????dunno wut im talkin bout...but-
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Damn! sounds like most of us out there
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This was cute, it was honest and flowed pretty well. Good job!
-Becks
I'd applaud, but i already used all the ones I have for today
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The poem was true. There were no seems of thought creative. no orginal metaphor or similie or personification. There was no poetics.
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"to good" should be "too good" besides that minor little thing. I like how this piece flowed it sets kind of a mellow tone, which works for this poem. Plus I just like the poem, so yeah... good job!
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very cute, I like the way it flowed and somehow caught your attention more towards the end, thanks for the comment and I look forward to hearing more out of you
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VERY WELL DONE!!!
This EXCELLENT piece flowed so well and sounded such a common truth powerfully. You definitely have talent!! ...(and thank you for your comm on my piece...much appreciated). I love that you did this, as it's so true. If there is a person who hasn't experienced this, I don't think I've met him/her ever. I have, however, met some incredibly tolerant and loving individuals.
Thank you for speaking the truth with skill.
all the best.........................Lionslove
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I can feel how exhausted you are in this poem.
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