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~~ Easter~~

It is time for Easter
It will be here in awhile
Little boys must stand still
For a heartfelt hug
This in no time for frogs and mud
Straw hats of blue with flowers pressed
Is the style with many a silk dress
Loose blonde curls, and no hair that's teased
Will soon blow in a soft spring breeze
All churches stand so tall and proud
As it welcomes the well dressed crowd
With whispers and love the red velvet pews are lined
Love and friendship rekindled in many a mind
The minister stands tall the scripture is read
It tells how Jesus was crucifed and rose from the dead
This Easter message highly proclaims
That Christ our blessed Redeemer reigns~

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Happy Easter to all my friends here on All Poetry
Written April 14th, 2003

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  • earthstar
    January 4, 2008
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    I too love Easter and can not wait for it. I love this holiday. It makes me sad too. God paid such a high price for our sins. I know that God love you dearly. Sometime it hard to have faith. I get out my cd of the passion and play it every year. It reminds of how much he suffered for our love. This is a great message my dear. You write so very well.


  • Lurie
    May 22, 2003
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    I think I havve read this before but 'tis where the link brought me....it's still a very lovely poem sis!!!!! Bless you Susan ~Laura


  • vampira1665 silver member
    April 17, 2003
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    Wonderful

    Oh my goodness that was wonderful. I truely enjoyed it. I had an aweful day and decided to sit here and write abit(it is by the way 1am)and read this. It made me smile. Thank you so much for sharing it. Hugs and Happy Easter, Tisha


  • hartofsilver
    April 16, 2003
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    I really liked this susan, very cute and very expressive

    thanx, happy easter to you to hope you have a good one

    have a good night susan
    kayla*

  • predator
    April 16, 2003
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    very very cute gotta love the real meaning of easter

    p.s i never did like the easter bunny he looks too nice he might be a spy


  • Romhain
    April 16, 2003
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    Easter...to me it's about the rebirth of nature...and it is a time for children...to be born...or a time for them to enjoy being children...I liked this piece alot...thanks for posting it....hugs, Ro

  • BlazingSwords
    April 16, 2003
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    cute, cute, cute. Wonderful imagery in this one. I swear, I could close my eyes and see what you wrote. Almost makes me think of a time when there was dirt road and candles or lanterns as the only lights, and that sort of thing
    Maybe its just me... lol
    Beautiful Susan
    -Heather

  • Torn
    April 16, 2003
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    amazing write

    amazing write, very intresting.

    happy Easter


  • Serene
    April 15, 2003
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    And a happy Easter to you too, such a fine message of Easter, excellently written~


  • hazel ice rose
    April 15, 2003
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    Good write, well written. I like the descriptions you used, also. Good job, keep it up. Enjoyed alot here.
    hir

  • PLayFuL KiLLeR .x.X.
    April 15, 2003
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    awwww this is so cute!!! loose blonde curls of little blue eyed girls, such a perfect image of a perfect april day, happy easter!!!
    .x.x. Marie


  • Kalexi
    April 15, 2003
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    So beautiful, Susan I love this write, I hope your Easter is filled with love and joy

    Love ya,

    Karen/


  • Danna Hobart
    April 15, 2003
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    Awwww.... thank you, Susan... I am soooo not ready for Easter. I am completely lagging behind this year. I feel more like the bunny from Alice in Wonderland... I'm late, I'm late!


  • Redstormy gold member
    April 15, 2003
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    Happy Easter Susan, my youngest son is still home. He is going to graduate this year. I made a Easter basket for him like I did when he was little this year. Lovely poem susan.

    Red


  • sarahspoeticheart
    April 14, 2003
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    Happy Easter to you to mu dear Susan~

    This reminded me so much of when I was a child and I would have on that beautiful soft silk dress with my hat and my curls hanging down from all sides. (I had a head full of blonde curls and you would never know from this straight haired bronette) hehe And my cousin Jimmy would have his little suit on and we would hide the egss around the outside of the house and me and jimmy would have to find them and each put them in our baskets and then when we couldn't find anymore, we would count who had the most! hehe God, I remembered all of that with this poem hun.

    Such a gorgeous write and Happy Easter my friend!!~~

    Much love~

    Lady Sarah~


  • ScarsToHeal
    April 14, 2003
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    Oh wow. Another piece beautifully done. I am still impressed by your work Susan. All of it gives such meaning.

    With love,
    Jey


  • Morrowind
    April 14, 2003
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    Love this Hon.. I remember learning my piece
    for Easter and being called up to speak it at church
    And getting all dressed up for Easter too!!
    This was so Special! it brought nice memories
    Love this Susan
    A very Sweet write! ~Happy Easter to You Susan~
    Love ~~Mina


  • Maureen silver member
    April 14, 2003
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    Excellent!

    Very nicely done, Sis! Great poem for Easter...I really enjoyed it!

    Love Ya!
    < 3 Maureen

  • Risen Demon
    April 14, 2003
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    Beautiful

    I loved this poem! Its message truly speaks to me. Jesus is so often left out of the Easter Season and it is good to see Him get a poem! Great job on this one!


  • Sherry gold member
    April 14, 2003
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    A beautiful write Susan and lovely thoughts of easter of what it is about Jesus.... Hugs,Sherry


  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 14, 2003
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    Happy Easter To You/ Great Piece

    Oh, I Love This Piece, Perfect Work, For A Perfect Love!

    This Easter Message Highly Proclaims
    That Christ Our Blessed Redeemer Reighns~

    Such A Wonderfully Written Piece, I Enjoyed This Much!!!
    Thanks For Sharing Your Thoughts And Faith With Us All!!!

    -Timothy


  • rufina caraid gold member
    April 14, 2003
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    Happy Easter and a safe holiday Susan.
    ~von~

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