personal invasions.
broken hearts.
explanations.
though they came too late
you have moved on
as i said you would.
you wanted an excuse to be her man
but she'll knock you down without a prayer.
you think you're broken now
wait until the third time
its always the charm
always the kicker.
i'm not going to be alone
and pine over your existance.
i think thats what i'm supposed to do
its written in your journal of corrupted innocence.
late night conversations
polygamous relationships.
i am through with feeling second best
take her love
and find your happiness.
I'll steal whatever is left
while its mine to take....
Just because it's wearing a price tag,
doesn't mean it isn't free to me.
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Written August 23rd, 2006
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Wow, this is very strong and very out there. It states your opinion and it has a clear sense of the story that goes with it. I absolutley adored it!
~Merber~ -
Wooah Suze, this is a strongly voiced, and honest reaction to a heartfelt predicament. And, there I was worried-- concerned about you just a few days ago. Now I realize that I needed not to have. I knew you were strong, but didn't realize that you are as strong as you are. I love the irony in the line, "it's written in your journal of corrupted innocense." And the ending,"Just because it's wearing a pricetag,/doesn't mean it isn't free to me." Keep your chin up and continue to face things as you have. Your daughter and you will find happiness b/c you already have each other; the rest will fall into place in that karmic way. Stay healthy, and best wishes always.
Edited on Aug 23, 7:06 p.m. because 'b/cX3=adhd- why?'. -
oooh. great write suze. i love it.
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