You can curse me,
You can hurt me.
Because the truth is I don't care anymore.
You can hate me,
You can fight me.
Because the truth is I am unloved.
You can break me,
You can abuse me.
Because the truth is that's all I'm good for.
You can feel me,
You can trash me.
Because the truth is that's all you really want.
You can harm me,
You can burn me.
Because the truth is it's not like I haven't had it before.
You can torment me,
You can love me.
Because the truth is I'm not sure what that is anymore.
You can mind game me,
You can psych me.
Because the truth is I'll never have felt a thing.
You know that life plays parts too,
You know I'm not the sweet angel true.
You know wherever and whatever I am today,
You can always haunt me because I don't care anyway!
Author notes
This is just a build up of frustrations that I'm feeling and I am feeling this right here and right now. Hope you enjoyed.
Written August 23rd, 2006
A contest entry
- Somtimes its hard by Jasmine Minx.
800 points, ended August 25, 2006, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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hmm I'm not sure how I became David lol
~marianne~ -
Very dark write from someone who is the light of day. And there are many who will go through this and I can feel the sadness very much. Deep!!!
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omg where did this come from????
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Hi David. I am here again, reading this sad poem of you. But this is a great poem eventhough describing of your frustrations. I can understand the feelings because I also feel that right now. The wound is still open but little by little you can feel nothing anymore. This is nice on expressing your feelings, a little help of relief. But one day soon you can smile and laugh again!
GRACE -
Hehe, amazing. I can feel your frusration in this and I know I've also felt this way before...many times. But it's always good to remember that not everyone will do that...kind people exist and only want your happiness.........it's sad that you even have to feel this way.....no one should have to hurt because of someone else... Yet it's the painstaking truth that where happiness lies pain does too. In some form at least...and people don't even realize it....someone could think something is the greatest thing to ever happen to them and it turn out, it hurts more than anyone would ever know in the end. But that's me rambling off topic...well I never really was "on" topic...so anyway. Great Poem. Good jorb with it and good luck in the contest! (Not that you need luck....but oh well...there are a lot of entries now...it's got me kind of worried
) Hahahahah.
~Lacy~ -
Great work! I feel your pain. What others don't understand that they can keep hurting us until we don't care anymore. After this, they can't hurt us again. Awesome piece. Good luck in the contest.
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outstanding
Outstanding write Marianne...hey...I vow from now on...you will have a nomination for POTM as long as I write (hey..that's been longer than dirt for me here)...you deserve that there....I had my "moment" in the sun in Feb '05...I was never one for the limelight I've written 1200 since then......smile and hugs...love, David -
My Hero
Whoa, that's a lot of pent up aggression, and you placed it down well. But don't worry, hopefully, by the end of this year, you will have been POTM of starlite.
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