~For Sweet Sue~
This garden’s filled with many things
from bushy shrubs to flowering bloom,
and if you listen really close
you’ll be rewarded with a tune.
A tune you ask? How can that be?
Well listen and I’ll justly tell,
for nothing grows without the help
of humming creatures in the dell.
They fly to here and buzz to there
spreading pollen to all around,
their score is sang in harmony
to all the souls that live in ground.
And each time that they visit hence
a little gold is made and saved,
dispersed upon each waiting heart
from honey pot of earthen clay.
And so, Sweet Sue I send this day
birthday wishes and so much more--
From my little pot of honey
filled with love and hugs galore!
Author notes
Happy Birthday Sweet Sue, may your garden always be filled with honey! 
Written August 23rd, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Wish Sweet Sue Happy Birthday Contest by Sandygram.
300 points, ended August 25, 2006, 2 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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thats soo sweet, and on her birthday!! oooo i wish
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Such a beautiful and heartfelt birthday dedication plus a beautifully image-filled poem about the garden. I like it very much. Best of luck in the contest. ~Jim
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Dear Sandi;
Special poem for a special person. This is just full of good, positive, thoughtful love and caring. It's a treat indeed to see sincere writes such as this. As usual your style is just fluid in reading. OH... HAPPY BIRTHDAY, Sweet Sue! -
You are so welcome
I hope it's the best one every!
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This is so beautiful Sandi. I coudn't ask for a lovelier birthday gift. Thank you for the sweet wishes.
~ Sue
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