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Just A Kiss

Beneath the moon and star filled sky
Caresses whispered in the night
Pleasured senses to ignite

A dew kissed drop of heaven's bliss
Silken fleshes collide in lust
Exhilarating passioned thrust

Pleasured senses to ignite
And fan our burning fire
To build a crescendo of desire

Exhilarating passioned thrusts
Bodies tangled together as one
Their needs to come undone

To build a crescendo of desire
A dew kissed drop of heaven's bliss
Beneath the moon and star filled sky
Where it started with just a kiss

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Written August 23rd, 2006

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    September 18, 2006
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    Thank you for the comment, much appreciated.

    Storm
  • dillpickle62
    September 18, 2006
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    Wonderful

    Whoa... This is a beautiful poem. It sure beats The Other Side Of Heaven. Thank-You for sharing it with the world.

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 23, 2006
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    Thanks sweetie. I think we all hope...

    Storm
  • Trackrules
    August 23, 2006
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    Wow sweetie great poem! I hope I get to experience a kiss like this. :-)

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 23, 2006
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    Thank you Tang, always appreciate your comments.

    Storm

  • intanglio2ring
    August 23, 2006
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    Dear StormGoddess,
    Yep!
    See what a bit of moonlight will do to a person. Mmmm! Starting with a kiss is always a gift from the heavens.
    Beautiful!
    Tang

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 23, 2006
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    Keith, my dear, that depends on what we describe as love. For I love many things, but right now I am in love with life. And that is what's holding me together. My "love" will come eventually, I hope.

    Thank you for the comments
    Storm

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 23, 2006
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    Thank you Sandy, appreciate it.

    Storm

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 23, 2006
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    Thank you ma dear. Had to get my behind out of that slump.

    Storm

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 23, 2006
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    Thank you Sissy, appreciate it.

    Storm

  • Keith Drew gold member
    August 23, 2006
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    Beautiful

    A kiss more potent in its form than any power thereafter.
    For the kiss is two hearts beating as one.Eyes closed yet seeing a world of need.
    Are you in love Storm Goddess?
    No way could you write like this from your heart.
    If you were not?

  • Heavenly Angel
    August 23, 2006
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    Wonderfully sensual piece, Storm! Very very well done!

  • dutch2lips
    August 23, 2006
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    oh daymn sensual Storm!!!

  • Hekate gold member
    August 23, 2006
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    Loved it!

    WOW this was incredible....I loved it. What a great job sis you did wonderful...and a perfect background with it of course!

    Kari
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