Dark..........
it may be a nightmare,
that you see yourself murdered, by whom?
may be, by your brother
that loves you
he sees you, going to a wrong way
and he wants you back, with no sins
so, he kills you
you get up and afraid from,
sleeping with him in the basement.
I think that he loves you
so much and he didn't know what to do
to help you
Night mare
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Written August 22nd, 2006
A contest entry
- The Dark Side by StormGoddess.
300 points, ended August 23, 2006, 25 entries
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Urm Idon;'t really get how you could be murdered and still have thoughts. I also don't understand why the dead corpse would comment on who killed him or her and only think about their brother. Please explain this to me as I honestly don't understand.
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