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Dark Life

Dark..........
it may be a nightmare,
that you see yourself murdered, by whom?
may be, by your brother
that loves you
he sees you, going to a wrong way
and he wants you back, with no sins
so, he kills you
you get up and afraid from,
sleeping with him in the basement.
I think that he loves you
so much and he didn't know what to do
to help you
Night mare

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Written August 22nd, 2006

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 22, 2006
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    Wow this was a bit out there. Kind of creepy in a sorta way. I actually read this three times, and each time took something different from it. Nice work.

    Thanks for entering and good luck
    Storm