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My Viscious Cycle

The sun fades the horizon, another day comes to close.  Left behind in shadows, it's better I suppose.  Just lurking in the darkness, a place I call home.  Lost soul tormented, wherever I may roam.  Silence sharply broken, by the beating in my chest.  One wish to close my weary eyes, and finally may I rest.  The torture locked within, no longer can I bare.  Sick of all the fools who always gawk and stare.  Point that finger and laugh, no difference from the norm.  And then they wonder why I go by the name Storm.  Take your pick, it really matters not.  Either pouring rains of hurt, or clasps ring mighty hot.  But in the end, it all turns out the same.  Heading home with tears to hang my head in shame.  Shout out to the heavens, praying for the light.  A need to be held again, to see me through the night.  And when the emptiness echoes, through a soul so alone.  The piercing cries of silence is all that's ever known.  This desire that I feel, creates such a sin, turning fast to hate, to myself within.  Worry not, for this burden that I hold, is the energy that seems to keep my soul.  I pray some day,, when this cycle comes to end.  That somewhere in the heart, the feelings finally mend.

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Written August 22nd, 2006

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 22, 2006
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    Thank you hun. I think, at least a few, of my prayers are being answered. Or at least smacking me in the face to open up a bit. Appreciate the comments.

    Storm

  • Hekate gold member
    August 22, 2006
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    Love you!

    I pray some day,, when this cycle comes to end.
    Don't we all?? This was so dark and deep. Thank u so much for sharing it with us!

    Kari

  • Allure of a Rose
    August 22, 2006
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    Most welcome. Look forward to reading more of you work.

    Best~Wishes~and~Poison~Kisses
    -Allura-

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 22, 2006
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    Tang, you are a sweetheart. Thank you. I know I have to look the other way and find the bright side. Just some things going on that have me really slumped right now. But your words really touch me. Chin is up hun, and I am going to find those wings. Again thank you my friend.

    Autumn

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 22, 2006
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    Thanks for the comments, appreciate it.


    Storm

  • intanglio2ring
    August 22, 2006
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    Dear StormGoddess,
    Did we book passage somewhere on the same SS Minnow Boat?
    I used to have a complex about why me or what's wrong with me, how could this happen! It just does! It's a sad thing when reality sets in and those that you've counted on can't be trusted and I/we become unloved.
    Chin up sweetheart, change your chant! I used to say unknowingly "I don't want to live like this!" And my body started to respond to the negative I fed it! Not I say looking to the future "I will grow wings and get out!" Not sure when just yet - but looking for better days!
    Hope this was a pick-me-up!
    Tang

  • Allure of a Rose
    August 22, 2006
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    Whoa. That's pretty much all I can say. This piece is just so mesmerizing. I love every bit of it. The background is awesome as well. But yeh.. amazing down to the last word. I fuckin' love this.

    What's love without a little poison?

    -Allura-
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