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Sweet Sweet Jesus

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Sweet Sweet Jesus

Jesus hold me,
make me whole,
give salvation,
save my soul.

Jesus tell me
words so true,
never ending,
love from you.

Jesus teach me
how to pray,
take my burdens,
on this day.

Jesus show me,
your sweet love,
fill my heart,
from above.

Jesus make me,
feel reborn,
cleanse my soul,
this new morn.

Hold me Jesus,
help me through,
oh sweet Jesus,
I love you.



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Written August 22nd, 2006

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  • Melba Solis-Z
    August 25, 2006
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    very beautiful poem.


  • gullionmar
    August 23, 2006
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    sandy wow what a beautiful poem very well written simply a pleasure to read


  • purple wings
    August 22, 2006
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    jesus was truely the man.every time he opened his mouth it was always something deep and perfound.great stuff.

  • tamslucky7s
    August 22, 2006
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    Your poem is a wonderful praise to the Lord


  • Gvn
    August 22, 2006
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    This is a great poem, and the image you had above it adds a lot more to the meaning of it and really got me thinking alone. The poem wasn't too long which was great and the words you said were obviously said by a religious person and I think it's good that we can see that not everyone is turning to scientology for beliefs. You did a great job on this poem. ^_^

  • confussed one 83
    August 22, 2006
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    maybe you could help me i feel the same

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