Dream like you own no other life
...Or drown in stagnant waters
Of a government inflicted reality
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Written August 22nd, 2006
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- 3 lines by UnderTheFloorboards.
300 points, ended August 28, 2006, 30 entries
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Short but strong...sometime you only need a few lines to make a point! And this was very powerful.
Thanks for entering
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Interesting three lines you have penned here. Better to dream and live a life of make believe than live in the real word created by the government of the people, for the people, etc. etc. etc. Really makes one think.
Much said in these few lines.
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Dear nays-lil-boat
wonderful job and very strong indeed.
love,
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Great!!
That is so strong. _nora -
Convicting AND to the point. Very nice.
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i like this it has a strong meaning
-Michele
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