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Lonely, not alone.

There's an ominous cloud above me,
Known as the midnight sky.
I'm walking with my best friend;
We speak and wonder why.
Silence isn't forbidden,
Especially since we both understand...
The imaginary raindrops splashing at our feet
Say we don't belong in this land.

Author notes

From August 3rd to August 18th I was at my best friend's house, and I wrote this while I was there. I guess it's mostly about two friends (guess who ;P) who understand almost everything about each other, and can just feel lonely together, finding silent comfort in one another.
Written August 22nd, 2006

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  • Auburn Sunrise gold member
    March 7, 2007

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    awww

    This is wonderful! I think it's great you have a friend like this and it was so well written! Keep up the good work!


  • neverontime
    August 29, 2006
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    A picture well painted. It is nice to have friends like this who understand one another without a single word. Friends like this are few and far between, you are lucky to find such a friendship. Love this write. Great job. Susan