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Guiding Light

Stability.

It's lovely to know,

There is always a rock to climb upon,

When life goes storming by.

A place to climb,

Above the tempest.

Secure,

Beneath great wings.

It's lovely to have,

Such a bright,

Guiding light,

Renting,

The deepest night.

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Written August 22nd, 2006

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  • tears.of.silence
    September 29, 2006
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    Stability.

    It's lovely to know,

    There is always a rock to climb upon,

    When life goes storming by.

    A place to climb,

    Above the tempest.

    Secure,

    Beneath great wings.



    Excellent words. I just love the fact that you started this poem out so strong and the beauty of your words is wonderful... Kahy