I'm,
insane over your looks,
locked by your words,
deepened by your voice,
charmed by your presence,
and love only you.
You're,
depressed by my features,
upset overhearing my phrases,
angry over my vull speech,
anguished by my presence,
and love more than one.
Love doesn't travel one way.
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Written August 22nd, 2006
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this explains somthing we all feel in a relationship sometimes. or atleast i know i have. that one sided feeling that just doesn't seem to come back to you. you did a good job capturing this, even if you weren't trying to. i think we all read a little of what we want into poetry, so we can use it to best suit our needs. and me, i'm a rambler, so i'll stop. thanks for sharing this
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excellent
That was very interesting to read, really. I liked it very very much, though. Keep it up! =)
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