Dismal thoughts erode the walls of her mind
Infamy is hidden within each little line
She looks up to her crimson sky and prays for a better tomorrow
But she always finds herself wrapped up in the same sorrow
Alarming images brutally invade her dreams
Shocked, she wakes up to her own piercing screams
She grows weaker and weaker with each passing day
She chokes on words to meaningless to say
Hiding all alone in her room so no one can see her tears
Becoming this way was always her biggest fear
They can never understand the emotions she holds inside
No one can possibly count the numerous times she has lied
The razor makes sickening marks upon her pale skin
The faint voice tells her to give up and give in
She locks the door, and holds her breath
Tonight this poor soul ran away with death
Author notes
this all came to me. its not that great. tell me what you think please
Written August 22nd, 2006
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pimp
i like this a lot because it speaks to me but that's probably because i can relate to a lot of it. keep writing, i've read a lot of your shit and your really good. keep it going.
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"Tonight this poor soul ran away with death" Ah. I love that line.
Lying is the biggest part of dying. If that makes any sence to you. -
Thanks for the great comment. It was very much appreciated. thanks again
your twin =]
Isabel -
wow this is so freaking sad..very deep and emotional..but you did an amazing job on it..i absolutly love it..great job and keep it up!
love ya
your twin -
Thanks for your lovely comments on my works. Yeah I have been having writer's block for a while now. So I am going nuts! lol. Yeah Twisted Fairy Tales is my sis on and off AP. shes an awesome writer. =] thanks again
Isabel
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This was kinda depressing. Yet beautiful in a morbid way. Twisted Fairy Tails told me about you so I came to check you out. I like your page and your poetry is really good. Shame you haven't writen anything in a while. You should. I would be really happy to read it.
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Vermillion -
This is amazing isabel..my favorite line is.....She looks up to her crimson sky and prays for a better tomorrow."But she always finds herself wrapped up in the same sorrow" Awesome write Isabel!
ME
PS_I SM"ORE YOU! I said it FIRST!
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Hmm. Well I like it lol. The flow seemed a little awkward but that might just be me, but as always the rhyming was great. I liked the whole idea of running away with death. I thought that was cool =] Lovely job.
xxJessieMK
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