Most kids like candy and sweets.
Maybe some like cake and treats.
But what do I like?
And no, I'm not like Mike.
I like subs from Subway!
The creamy mayo,
the soft 6" bun,
the crunchy yet juicy lettuce,
it's so much fun!
And I can't forget,
the thin and tasty turkey!
It tops it all off
like a cherry on top.
I love subway so much...
I could eat a whole bunch!
So here's to my favorite food
in which for I'm always in the mood!
Subway's the best...
leading all the rest.
Author notes
I LOOOOOOOVE Subway's subs!
Written August 22nd, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- For the kids 12 and under: YOUR FAVORITE TREAT!! by Sky Prince Ireland.
300 points, ended August 29, 2006, 4 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I've never actually been to Subway. But it sounded yummy from what you wrote. I like how you showed what most kids liked first and then said what you like best, it made it more personal knowing what you like and how you differ from other kids. This was a very hopeful write which I liked a lot. Keep writing and good luck in the contest
All the best
Pozo
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delishous
woooooow your good at write ing i hope you win mane now i want sub way i like sub way alot to but my favorite is watermelons
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Ooooooooooh I don't blame you. Subway is deeeeeeeeelicious!
Thanks for sharing this and entering my contest.
Lots of luck to you.
Brian
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