Another day, just going by, the
Need to find myself inside.
Open wounds, of heart and mind keep
Treading my soul's finest line.
Hopes and dreams, that's all I wish. To
Escape the reality thrown amiss. Just once,
Reach for that shooting star,
But seems I never can get far. To
Resurrect the cold I feel,
Ignite this heart, just once for real. I've
Choked back tears too much to count, to
Keep myself from falling down.
Instead I hide behind this guise, in hopes
No one will realize. Yet
Time again, I just keep going, still
Hoping that they aren't knowing. These
Eyes hold words no one can hear,
Where loneliness in my greatest fear.
Accept me for who I am, no need to
Let me fall. But once again, here
Lies, just another brick in the wall.
Author notes
Another Brick in the Wall, Pink Floyd
Written August 22nd, 2006
In a list
- Sad and Sorrow • next in list
- Against the Ivory (inspired by music) • next in list
- Acrostics • next in list
A contest entry
- Let's Celebrate The 70's !!!.... by poet2angels.
300 points, ended August 31, 2006, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thank you. Your words mean more than I can express Anne.
Storm -
be sure in this, i (humble me) accept you, wriggle at another brick in your wall to see more.
My love to you Storm, this is a goosebump write (you know what i mean)
Anne -
Thank you sweetie, appreciate the comments.
Storm -
Thank you hun, really appreciate it.
Storm -
Thank you for the comment, much appreciated.
Storm -
Thank you Sandy,appreciate it.
Storm -
Awesome!
I love Acrostics and you did wonderful...great job sis. I loved the flow and everything! Good luck in the contest!
Kari -
Great write sweetheart! I really liked this one.
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I love this...Wonderful Acrostic of a great Pink Floyd song!
The way you displayed it is awesome, or should I say "FAR-OUT!"
LOL....Great job on this!
Lynda
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A totally righteously cool piece; loved this!
All the best!
Sandy
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