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Lost Words



I cannot speak
every thought blocked
only you
in the empty emptiness
that emerges when I see you.

Words miss
without being missed.
the absolute calmth
takes over
without overwhelming

An unexplainable peace
And a locked throat
the disappeared words,
the sentences that I
with all my strength
collect as
I blink and the
world moves again.

The timeless moment
when you are where
I should be because you
stole my thoughts en security
where insecurity is..


Author notes

calmth is the word I want to use, it feels right in its place but isn't correct.. does enyone have a suggestion?
Written August 21st, 2006

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  • Always Deena
    August 22, 2006
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    You have to with your gut,Savan,and stay true to your heart.
    Love you,
    Deena