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Fading

In shadowed realms, I face my only reality.  Wondering what it is that deprives me from sanity.  Never quite knowing why these tears I shed.  Always hoping to awake one day free of all this dread.  Dreams cluttered by clouds, a storm I always seem to face.  Lord, if they only knew, my wish to leave this place.  This hell that seems to consume my very being.  Exit stage right, constantly I'm fleeing.  Running to see the setting of the sun, hurry, fast, before this day is done.   One after another, always the same ole' same ole'.  But desires have been abandoned, in which to make me whole.  No longer do I care, for what nor where I shall exist.  And find myself fading, quickly in the mist.

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A message written within the write,
speaks volumes to me tonight.
The mist is circling ever near,
where fate I see is very clear.
Written August 21st, 2006

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 22, 2006
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    Thank you Jay. I appreciate all of you and all you do.

    Storm

  • HurricaneJay
    August 22, 2006
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    Sure make me sit there and figure it out. But it isn't true. You aren't going anywhere. You are way too loved and needed by many. I love ya girl, don't ever forget it.
    -Jay

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 21, 2006
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    Both, huh? You're right. I knew you would. Thanks hun. Love you.

    Storm

  • Night Valkyrie
    August 21, 2006
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    Autumn, hon, get this out of your head. I know you are going back and forth with a lot of things, but sweety, I am here if you want to talk. And yes, I got the message in it- both of them.

    My love to you
    Vickie

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 21, 2006
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    Thanks hun.

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 21, 2006
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    Thank you.

    Storm
  • Trackrules
    August 21, 2006
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    Hey sweetie I know things are going to get better. I care for you a bunch and I hope you come out of this funk. As always I am here for you
  • femurlee
    August 21, 2006
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    Extremely cool.

    This is really moving. Very somber. "Always the same ole' same ole'" really made this peace sad. Good write!
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