Chains bind her earthly form,
naked,
cold.
She feels the eyes,
staring, watching,
her every nerve on edge.
But she cannot see.
There is no light here.
Spectral hands creep,
clawing up her thighs...
slowly.
Higher,
ever higher.
The mist,
resting just below,
causing her to shiver.
Her back arches,
reaching.
Needing that ghostly caress.
Gently, she spreads,
thighs parting,
inviting.
Fingers part,
searching,
pressing.
His phantasmal tongue...
enters.
And she moans.
Deeper,
still deeper.
She is breathless,
gasping.
Her hips impel,
bucking against him.
Faster...
Jolted,
she is filled,
exploding pleasure
as her screams echo.
The essence lingers.
Sodden,
quivering,
she opens her eyes...
But nothing is there.
Author notes
Ok, so I went off the deep end. Just call me Queen Hornball!! = )
Written August 21st, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Roses Desinerated by Radio sirens4 Death.
300 points, ended September 4, 2006, 26 entries
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Thanks hun, appreciate it.
Storm -
Lovely Storm, I am always a fan of your pieces, to let the womans feel such pleasure but in the end its in her head to have nothing there for maybe it was a creature before her eyes open the creature runs off into the night.
Great Poem
~Killing Lonliness -
Thanks Vickie, glad you like it. And now I can't wait to see one from you.
Storm -
Ooh, yum. Now this is dark and just so sexually charged. I really like this. Hmm, now I have this urge to write one of my own.
Nice sis, nice.
Vickie -
patience right! LOL
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Just wait, lol.
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Great poem sweetie. Got me going as well
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LOL. That cold shower.... literally?? LMAO. Glad you liked, thanks for the comments.
Storm -
Ya baby. . .can't wait for the movie version. Good luck and keep the perversions coming. . .I like. The next cold shower is on you.
James
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And you're complaining???????
LOL, thanks for the comments hun, appreciate it.
Storm -
Awesome write here Storm. Hot dark and erotic, better than watching a porn movie
Thanks again!! Got to keep the wife away from your work, she always attacks me after 
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LMAO, I guess that is good. My work here is done.
Thanks hun
Storm -
Damn Storm. Okay James, it is Storms fault..........AGAIN!
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Thank you hun. My two faves as well. So what better way then to mix 'em up a bit. Mmmmhmmm.
Storm -
AWESOME!
wow...that was dark and sooo awesome good...this was a incredible write...erotic dark and deep...you pulled my two favorites in one sis.
Good luck in the contest!
Kari
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