Mother fuckers gonna feel this
the cunt with no fronts back talking blunt
every-time I rhyme
I feel it in my veins
expressing my emotions
releasing all my pains
life won't get me down
pain just makes me strong
brother waits in heaven
dog it's been to long
jails are over crowded
streets are filled with drugs
feeling just to real
when talking like the thugs
life is fucking hard
these words for me to true
you might call it easy
but I'm not fucking you
walk a mile in my shoes
then tell me that I'm wrong
if pain don't fucking kill you
it can only make you strong
for I come from a place to dark
and the truths just hard to tell
I believe there is an heaven
cos this life's fucking hell
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Written August 21st, 2006
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my favourite...
a truly talented man with no fear to speak his mind, if only our wolrd had more like you, paul.
wonderful write this one is, never give up.
jayjay x -
Well Paul my mom always said everyone is living their own personal hell. I would suppose we could agree.
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excellent
you my dear have such a strength within you many could learn so much from you ...you have so much to offer this world with a willingness to share to teach tell of your mistakes in life. You know not that many people have that strength you really are a special man. As always your words have power full of emotional truths yet with that power comes pain it it this pain which makes your writes so powerful so real. damn straight..
thanks for this post
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Good
Very interesting poem. Your words exude pure anger, discontent and unacceptance. Very well put together, it had a good steady flow and rhymed quite well. If you ever have a free moment, maybe you would like to read a poem of mine called: Unmade of Unforgiveness... You may enjoy it.
Dimitri
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