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Remember Us

There were days in my life
Where everything seemed lost,
Dark
And broken.
Days where even the slightest bit of life and light
Seemed miles and miles away.
You cleared away my darkness,
Pushed away my past
And created room for a beautiful future.

You made my days colorful
And warm.
You are a beautiful soul,
A beautiful boy who showed me how to live…
To shine
Once again.

Darling remember Us,
Remember the way we are forever…
Know that this…
This love that we have formed is priceless
And perfect.
And know that I will remember you forever
…and a lifetime.

Know that I will dream of you,
And everything you are forever
…only to wish that I will find someone
Half as special as you.

When I leave this place,
And move on to a new chapter,
Know that I will hold on to you…
Even if perhaps you have moved on.
But please as you take your path in life
Remember how you would smile with me,
Remember how I loved you
Remember Us.

Thank you for healing me,
Thank you for holding my hand and lifting me high,
Over all my fears.
You are my knight and shining armor
Beautiful Boy.

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Written August 21st, 2006

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  • UncleSpace
    September 1, 2006
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    very strong...

    This is very beautiful and moving, very well stated. I hope you are well, hang in there!

    Unc

  • PalmettoSky
    August 21, 2006
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    what an awesome tribute to someone that you love. The power of love hass an amazing energy that when tapped can move mountains and create beautiful realities for all involved. Your poem is proof positive of this. Congratulations for coming into the light. Keep up the great work. Keep sharing your talent...the ripple effect is far reaching and never ending....peace...


  • Neptunian Scorpion
    August 21, 2006
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    Good

    This is a lovely piece of writing. I am just a little unsure if you are still together or not, it is a little ambiguous in the way it comes across. The gratitude for love is very evident and memories will forever remain, especially those of love.

    Dimitri


  • rosepoet
    August 21, 2006
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    Beautiful write expressing your emotions to a brighter side....
    You cleared away my darkness,
    Pushed away my past
    And created room for a beautiful future.
    Keep up the good feeling .....
    Thanks for the read


  • frog hugger
    August 21, 2006
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    This is absoulutley beutiful. So full of meaning and emotions. Wonderfully written. Great use of words. I can really realte. ~~Britt~~

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