Feelings that should have never started only seem to have begun.
Why these feelings are taking over my heart I will never know.
I’m suppose to be happy, I’m suppose to be glad,
but deep down inside,
Some things not glad.
I wish I knew why these feelings have begun, and make
the insecurety about these thought had never had time to think about second thoughts.
What’s wrong with my heart? Its as though it’s trying to say something to me,
but it only seemsto speak to me in silence.
Author notes
I don't know if this poem made any sense, I think like my other poems, it's just thoughts jubbled into sentences. Just tell me what you think please
Written August 21st, 2006
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i thought this was very good. i liked it. i hope ur doing ok. i havnt been on in awhile so i hope to talk to u soon
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Ooooo oooo oooo wowwwww i lovedd thisss!!! Omg im soo not even jokingg!! Just woww the last line hit me sooo hard because i can relate to it so much. Actually i can relate to the whole poem, i just really liked the ending
Sometimes its hard to explain how you feel when your confused, but in this poem it really showed me what you meant, and explains how i feel too.
Well done, this was really goood.
Me...Love You
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Yeah the whole subject that you are confused about does suck. big juicy ones to be exact. the poem was a little confusing, but i think i got the picture being painted here. i'm here if you want to talk. much love hun
Isabel
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