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Nothing is Right

I know I'm not normal right now
It's not like you need to tell me how to act
I'm sorry I can't be everything you want me to be
I'm sorry I'm not perfect
Does it make sense to you that I'm trying?
Do you even know that
I want to do better?
Everything I try to do
Nothing seems to turn out right

Author notes

Very short, but the last two lines are based off a Decemberists song.
Written August 21st, 2006

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  • Anime Freak
    January 5, 2007
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    very nice ^_^ loving it. talk to me buddy LYLAS! ^_^ *huggles*