Giving yourself so eagerly and willingly
my eyes can’t venture from your sight.
Softness of skin, your delicate beauty,
I demand all your yearning kisses tonight.
Clinging to me, bodies firmly pressed
a delight for my forceful arms to hold.
I whisper your name like a soft caress,
guarding your secret, I shall ever be bold
Chastity cannot be passions tamer
hearts weren’t made cold like a stone.
Desires exposed become our new master
seeking beyond danger to be alone.
We breath together as I kiss your lips
our first sacred intimacy as we join.
Sensations pound in my heart and hips
resonating down within my manly loin.
I shall fashion you brazen promises
to calm your innocent timid mind.
Tonight I claim your sensual caresses
for tomorrow is too lonely to find.
Author notes
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Option #1
Poetry is about imagery and emotion
Written August 20th, 2006
A contest entry
- For all the faces of love by DeepDarkDesire.
450 points, ended October 9, 2006, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Options for everyone by DancingShadowCorpse.
375 points, ended May 5, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Find Love Again by FallenFrmGrace.
600 points, ended June 1, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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This is a very sensual love poem, it is beautiful and sends my mind into a wonderful part of my imagination. There is one factor though... while it isnt too revealing, it is obvious that this is a poem about love making and to me, that falls under the catagory of erotica therefor, could you change your option number from 1 to 6.. I would hate to have to DQ this piece because of that.
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Uh, just wow. I'm sorry that this wasn't a great comment. It was just a good poem.
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Wow, that was so beautiful, so sensual and fluid that I damn near flipped my lid. Good job, my dear, and best of luck to you and Linda in your lives together. Take care!
Much Love,
Laura -
Dear BluRosePoet8488,
Thanks for the heads up on your woman theory! I'll be careful - promise!
Thanks for a wonderful compliment
Love,
Tang -
Dear hoodoolover,
Yep!
It's football season!
No - Like I said before I have been in a mood as late. Just questioning myself and directions. And missing a big hunk of my life that should be filled.
Mmmmm - Well, you know what I think of breasts!
Maybe I need a little red car again! (thinks again - nope - that's trouble)
You spoil me very nicely!
Tang -
My Dearest Red Red Rose,
Your gentle words come to meet our passions.
I've been in a mood as late and restless, yes warm blood does run through me and my urges are strong!
Such a public place to post a romance (looks around for a quite corner) Intimacy for me isn't a spectater sport. But it escapes from me into a poem. I'm so glad it moves you so!
Your adoring husband,
Tang -
Dear ariosto,
Thanks for a great compliment!
And for the heads up on our new poet!
Tang -
Tang,
You had better watch out with writing suff like this. You'll have all the women on her swooning and pining for you. (Not that you don't already)LOL! Definitely a classic vein running through this poem. Keep the ink flowing. Love and hugs...
~Donn~ -
Ooooh tang, this made my bosom swell with deep longing, very romatincally crafted, you continually amaze me with your writings, I have to agree with your wife, there must be something going on for you to have penned this deep passion!!
Beautiful! -
This is love poem in the classic vein....beauty, desire, lust all warpped in a tight package, whiose very 'tightness' makes the heat contained even more volatile.
good one! -
Dear catz,
(raising an eyebrow) Hmmmm! I've got you in a romantic mood - so close to your birthday! Is it truly Saturday?
Thanks for the wonderful compliment!
Tang
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Dear PhantomsAngel87,
Thank you for your amazing picture that inspired the poem. As soon as I seen it - I knew this was one to interpret.
I'm very glad the poem is received so well, my heart is glad!
I appreciate your wonderful compliment!
Tang -
This is so romantic, tang, so subtly erotic... you could easily turn a girls head, ya know.
It's a superb write and I wish you good luck in the contest
Dee
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fantastic write
Iwas so hoping someone would pick this picture to write about and I am thrilled you have my dear.
This is so beautiful and loving....
An amazing write, I thank you for entering my contest
And I wish you the best of luck
Keep up the great writing always
Stay safe -
Dear Lady Stone,
You ladies are making me blush!
But maybe that's a fair exchange
Thanks for your wonderful compliment!
I like you ~sigh~
Tang -
~sigh~
I agree with all other comments previous... man...... but that is wonderful.....so smooth and touching... the expectations of a touch the fullfillment.....aaahhh.....~sigh~.....
great write here...and good luck to you in the contest..
Krystal
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Dear Melodies,
(looks around for the fool who would toss a bucket of cold water on you) I'll save you my dear!
(notices quickly that the cold water has . . well. . the T-shirt now is. . ) My aren't you perky tonight! (leans over and checks the bucket to see if they used all the water)
(watching you carefully) Are you all right my dear?
(thinks of mouth to mouth - NOT!)
Thanks,
Tang -
You killed me good
Sigh....sigh....sigh...oh my....oh my.....clunk! as I fall over in a faint....and appear to be in a coma and revive only when a bucket of water is tossed on me. Then I have amnesia from the shock of it all and I can't remember who I am or why I am typing this, but I know how to do this: and this: and this: 
hahahaha
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Dear Tam,
Ahhh! (feels refreshed after shower) I got myself in a mood over this one too!
You are very kind with your compliments!
Thanks
Tang -
PASSIONATE
Tang, be still my heart!! This is so lovely. Passionate and filled with longing.......
I love the last line: for tomorrow is too lonely to find.
PERFECTION. You can write.
Blessings! Tammy -
Dear StormGoddess,
I wanna be in love!
Just finished this and am in a kind of mood! (looks around - with frustration setting in)
Thanks for your wonderful compliment.
I need a cold one! (shower that is!)
Tang -
Wow Tang, this is beautiful. Very passionate and sulty. The picture fits well, or rather you captured the picture well. Very nice. Good luck in the contest hun.
Storm
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